Localizing Exclamations


Final Fantasy XIII header Localizing Exclamations

“Gnhhh!”

“Whhhhaaaah!”

“Bah….ah….gahhhhhh…”

“Hmmmf!”

“Ehiehhh…”

“Mhaemm!”

These grunts, sighs, squeals and miscellaneous other vocalizations compose roughly 1/4 of the dialogues in the early hours of Final Fantasy XIII.

One one hand, they’re to be expected. Japan is known for its plethora of exclamations and onomatopoeiae. On the other — at least when translated literally — they make for a poor localization.

These sounds are often louder and longer than their English counterparts, or they simply have no equivalents. As such, they’re difficult to remove or replace and are usually left untouched. They’ve even become something of an accepted “quirk” among the more dedicated fans of Japanese media, but that doesn’t mean they can’t be handled in a more global-friendly fashion.

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I think the localization team for FFXIII wanted to give Vanille a unique voice — much like the Björk-esque Fran in FFXII — but the voice actress’ performance is a bit of a mess.

As things stand, vocalizations often come across as alien and awkward. They break the flow of conversation and the suspension of disbelief, and can leave a new audience feeling put off.

Sure, one can always argue for the purity and cultural authenticity of any given product, but that’s being a bit of a stick in the mud. Literal translations lack context and social nuances, and those fully familiar with them might as well experience the original versions. In order to make the products more palatable to a different audience, some things need to change. FF XIII in particular is a title Square Enix wanted to be a global blockbuster, not just a Japanese game released to a niche audience outside of its home country, so it stands to reason that they’d want to iron out these kinks.

So how can this be done?

A couple of points:

  • If possible, simply remove the exclamations altogether. The ones that could easily be cut are left in to keep things consistent, but getting rid of them shouldn’t be an insurmountable issue.
  • Use local equivalents of the vocalizations if available. For example, make a character surprised by a hand on his shoulder utter a short “Huh?” instead of the original, “Mwwwnnhaaa?”
  • Use actual words or sentences for sounds that have no local counterparts. A character crying out “Gwahhhhhhhhhhhh!” for three seconds after witnessing a car crash could easily be replaced with a quick “Oh my god!”
  • Meld the exclamations into the speech itself. I’m not an expert, but I noticed many of the vocalizations were isolated within the dialogue, whereas in English they’d part of it, e.g., “Mmmm, I don’t know about thaaaaaaaat.”
  • Finally, keep these points in mind when developing the game, and provide the team(s) with the tools necessary to port it. Automated lip-synching is already widely used, but I’m sure other functionality or just the permission to alter the in-game cutscenes would be appreciated.

Of course there are more issues to consider as well — perhaps toning down on the dramatic, clenched-fist poses with characters uttering such phrases as “I’ll do my best!” — but those are a whole other topic…

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  1. #1 by Torano2 on August 1, 2010 - 5:57 pm

    I’m not sure how much those squeels take away from the game. Many people grew up with them.

  2. #2 by The Management on August 1, 2010 - 6:05 pm

    Yes, but they represent that niche audience, not a broader one that the product’s trying to reach.

    Like I mentioned elsewhere, I think the more literal translations are fine for games like Yakuza 3 and Persona 4. A large appeal of both titles is the cultural setting and its authenticity, and localizing them lock, stock and barrel probably wouldn’t have been the right move (e.g., Persona 1). Conversely, I would imagine many Japanese fans of GTA IV are drawn to it for its Americana.

    When it comes to “mainstream,” fictional settings, though, there’s no reason not to do a friendly localization. And it’s a two-way street as well: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ETYQ0UJ8e4Y

  3. #3 by Gabe Glick on August 10, 2010 - 8:21 am

    Thanks for calling attention to this. I’m a Japanese-to-English game translator (freelance, not in-house) and exclamations like these are the bane of my existence. I would love to just make a J-to-E Exclamations Reference dictionary of sorts that everyone in my field could use to avoid the kind of thing you discuss, but unfortunately different contexts often mean that even the same exclamation should be translated in different ways to create a more natural localization. Still, the problem won’t get better until more people are aware of it and fans stop accepting it, so once again, thanks for writing this.

  4. #4 by The Management on August 10, 2010 - 3:01 pm

    You’re welcome, and it’s great to hear from an actual translator! I can only imagine how many hoops one has to jump through when requesting “content changes,” especially as a freelancer, so I wish ya the best in your work.

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